Ten Little Christmas Angels: The One That Is Different

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By mary615

The Little Angel

This is a short story of a beautiful little girl who sings as an angel in the Elementary School Christmas Play. Even though she is dressed the same as the other little angels, there is just something about her that sets her apart from the other children.

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The Little Angel


THE LITTLE ANGEL

The auditorium of the elementary school was filled. Mrs. Walker was playing Christmas carols on the piano. The families of the Kindergarten class had come to see and hear their little ones performing the annual Christmas play. The mothers chatted among themselves. The fathers crowded together around the stage with their cameras, eager to take a picture of their little darling. The older children laughed and talked with each other. The stage was set with a manger in the center. A “Jesus” doll lay in the manger in the middle of a pile of hay. “Joseph” fidgeted in his long, grey robe, anxious for the play to start. “Mary” stood very still and proper beside “Joseph”. Her white robe covered the top of her head and reached the floor. Copper colored ringlets pushed their way out from the sides of her head covering.


Then the lights dimmed. Everyone became silent and very still. Mrs. Walker began to play “Away in a Manger”. There was a rustling sound from the back of the auditorium. The audience turned in unison to see ten little angels begin their slow walk down the aisle toward the stage. The tenth angel was smaller and shorter than the other little girls, but she walked tall and straight, as though she had a book on top of her head. Her walk seemed to say that she was proud to have been chosen for this important role in the play. She was identically dressed like the other nine little angels. A halo was held to her head in a sort of magical way, a pair of realistic wings had been attached to her erect little shoulders. Her long, white robe was made of satin. The hem covered her feet. Her footsteps made no sound. Her hands were hidden in the folds of the long, flowing sleeves. Even though this little angel was a carbon copy of the other little angels, there was something noticeably different about her. As the ten little angels passed by me where I was sitting, I could hear her voice above the others, singing the notes high and clear. Every word she sang was as clear as a bell.


The ten little angels took their places in two straight lines behind the manger. This little angel stood in the front row on the left side. Her baby fine blonde hair was long, reaching to her waistline. When the stage lights touched her hair, it shone. Her tiny face was very round, almost cherubic. Her eyes were the color of the bluest crayon. This little angel had a perfect turned up nose. Two dimples framed her mouth, and a third dimple was deep into her chin. Her lips were a rosy red, although she wore no lipstick. There was space inside her small mouth where two front teeth had been. She stood very straight, and as she sang, her face was joyfully lifted toward the ceiling. This was the most beautiful little girl I think I had ever seen.

When the performance ended, the children all ran off the stage to their waiting families. This tiny angel stood alone on the stage. Then her proud parents ran to her. Her father scooped her into his arms and hugged her tightly. Her Mother kissed her and hugged her, too.


As they walked away, arms around each other, I knew the little angel was blind.


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lord de cross profile image

lord de cross 6 months ago

So cute Mary!..and and a surprise ending. Wish YOU the best of luck on the contest my friend!

LORD

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ugochi 6 months ago

this is a nice story. keep it up

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Hi Lord, good to see you again. Thanks for the good wishes. I've read some of the entries, and they are good! Did you enter any of your works?? I hope so. Regards, Mary

Ugochi, thanks for reading my little story, and for the compliment. I look forward to reading your Hubs, too.

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Hyphenbird Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

This is a precious story and very well told. It makes me remember an old, old movie called Penny Serenade. If you can find it, you will just love it. I do hope you continue to write these short stories. I know with my own experience the more I write the better I get and my confidence grows. This one is a heart warmer.

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Hi Hyphenbird, coming from you, this is a meaningful comment. I do so admire your work. I remember Penny Serenade, it made me cry so hard. As a beginning writer, I have to say I do think this one is pretty good. Don't all writers think their work is good, though? Always good to see you.

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lord de cross 6 months ago

Yes!... is a poem as usual. You can find it, is called "I hear that cry" Thanks for asking, regards!

LORD

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picklesandrufus Level 6 Commenter 6 months ago

such a lovely and well told story. The video was perfect as well...my all time favorite song brought tears to my eyes when sung by this little angel.

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Hi Lord, I'll check your entry "I Hear That Cry". I'm getting SO far behind trying to just keep up. Good Luck!

Hi Picklesandrufus, Good to see you. I'm trying so hard to catch up, so if I don't read your work right away, I hope you'll understand. I'm working on a new entry! I love following you!

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Phoebe Pike Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

Interesting story. It really is amazing what children can do.

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Lord, I read your poem and commented on it. Think you should write a sequel to this poem.

Phoebe Pike, thanks for the compliment and for taking the time to read my little story. Goodnight.

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

What a lovely story and such a suprise ending, not what I was expecting at all.

Such an enjoyable read

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you Rosemay50 for the nice compliment. So glad you found my little story enjoyable! See you....

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thelyricwriter Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Mary, this was a great story and a great ending:) I tell you Mary, you have some story telling. Votes up and across but funny. I really enjoyed this one! Best wishes.

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Gypsy Rose Lee Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Wonderful and touching story. A great suprising ending.

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Good Morning, theLyricwriter! Thanks for reading my little story, and for the very nice compliment, and the vote! I hope the judges like it as much as you did!

Hi, GypsyRoseLee, I do think this is one of my better stories, and I'm so glad you liked it. I based the story on real life. There was a beautiful little blind girl who went to school with my children, and she was SO special.

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epigramman 6 months ago

....well my dear friend Mary you write like an angel yourself - VOCALCOACH would love this very much as I sincerely do - you certainly have a major talent yourself

for letting your readers see the sunny side in life and the goodness in other people - a gift that your hub readers are lucky to share ...... lake erie time ontario canada 8:10pm with the gas furnace blowing, two warm pussycats and their big daddy with a head cold but hanging in there and listening to the McGarrigle Sisters

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Hello Friend, Epi, Thanks for taking the time out of your busy day to read my little story, and for the nice compliment. Your opinion on my work means a great deal to me. I am now following VocalCoach. I think I can learn a lot from her (as I learn from you) Too bad you aren't in sunny S. Fl. It was beautiful and warm here today. Goodnight, my friend.

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Minnetonka Twin Level 7 Commenter 6 months ago

I just loved this touching short story and also the video of the little girl on "Britain's Got Talent." Just a heart-warming and uplifting hub Mary. :-)

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Hi Minnetonka Twin, So glad you found and read my story, and for the nice compliment about it. Yes, I love that little girl who sings, she is wonderful. See you again soon.

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi Mary,

This is such a beautiful and heartwarming story.

I believe in Angels.

Voted up, up and away!

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mary615 Hub Author 6 months ago

Hi Sue, I'm so glad you liked my little story. I believe in Angels, too. I had a real life experience that I'm going to write about someday. It was a near death experience, and I know I saw an Angel! I have a hard time putting it into words, but I'm going to try one day. Thanks so much for the votes, too. Goodnight....

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago

Hi Mary,

When the time is right, the words will come to you.

Goodnight.....

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